Date: 30/12/2009 04:49 Title: Black Widow
Awesome first chapter - especially the bit at the beginning with things like, he sat on the stool, his feet dangling in midair, - emphasizing how young he is and all - Ash's discomfort. And then the assassin scene was awesome, and then the Blunt and Jones scene!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, good, you caught those little hints toward his youth :D. I'm really glad you liked it all--I'll update as quickly as possible :).
Date: 10/12/2009 20:30 Title: Divergence
And here I was thinking my wish had come true. Yassen, you should have shoved the knife in a little bit farther, then Alex could have him mummy back, :*(
I loved it, please update soon?
Author's Response: Ooops, sorry D:. That was the last chapter, but check out Black Widow--it's a continuation of this. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 10/12/2009 20:27 Title: Divergence
Baby stealer, *grumble* That is the lowest form of evil, strealing someone's child. I hope Yassen kills her...*cough*.
Very good, intense and well written!
Author's Response: I do agree--and I hope you like/d the next chapter *grin*. Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 10/12/2009 20:25 Title: Divergence
Yassen, I 'luuuvvvv' you! Don't kill him, please? Lol, I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter.
Cliffhanger, grr, ^_^ I love to hate them.
Author's Response: Good, good, I'm glad to hear that you're loving it more and more :D. That's exactly what I want to hear! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 10/12/2009 20:22 Title: Divergence
Marie’s shouted goodbye echoed in her ears: He’s on his way St. Dominic’s!
I think you might need a 'to' here, ^_^ Later, you miss the dot in St. Dominic's. Very sad, but I'm glad Helen went to her husband. Very enjoyable (if you can manage fighting back tears ^_- )
Author's Response: Thanks for the grammar check, I'll get to those ASAP :D. I'm glad that you like it, and thanks so much for reviewing.
Date: 20/10/2009 11:16 Title: Divergence
Amazing story so far---I love it!!! And please let Alex have been taken to be trained by Scorpia, not really killed!!! But it would be so cool if John lived! You know, it would heal the rift between him and Helen AND then we can have all the drama when he realizes that Alex is alive and is a Scorpia assassin!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hehehe it's like you're psychic! ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 26/08/2009 02:21 Title: Divergence
Oh wow that just tore me apart -- brilliant and sad and everyone loses :( ... Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review--I was really experimenting with an different style here, and I'm glad that it was sad. :'(