Date: 09/07/2010 22:45 Title: And Even in Our Sleep
Another triumph :) Very nice, an easy read that suits both the characters. I have a really hard time writing Tom but he comes across so convincing when you do it. You make difficult subject matter and character voices look so easy and that is a real talent :)
Also your writing style is getting classier with each story. In short. I love it.
Author's Response: Hehehe thanks This made me a smile a bit Also your writing style is getting classier with each story. In short. I love it. as I chose the style as a nod to my old Harry Potter fic rather than as an experimental dip (and in the hope that some of my old readers/fans would take to my new fandom - but not much luck with this still! It's nice to know it reads comfortably and smoothly.
Date: 07/07/2010 10:34 Title: And Even in Our Sleep
I can't decide wether I'm disappointed that there aren't more details or thrilled at the way you leave the rest up to my (our) fantasies^^ Though either way you really have a way with word and descriptions. Even with a short story as this you manage to capture your readers and having them fill out the blanks. Really well done!
Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely comment! Really glad it worked for you - drabbling is fun!