Date: 11/01/2011 16:52 Title: Chapter 5
AMAZING story but it's so sad and horifying what Alex went through and to have to train others to go and do what he did....well sometimes I wonder sometimes why he doesn't just walk away it's not like the M16 have anything to hold him.
Also I'd be interested to see the kids response if they saw the extent of his scars and heard his story. I wonde how long it would take for the novalty of being a spy would wear of then.
Also random thought but it would be interesting if Yassen could have a word with Alex now considering he was always of the opinion that teenages should be woried about school and homework.
Better yet the strange conection between Yassen & Alex could help Alex. Sorry I'm sort of desperate for some silver lining right now and Alex has been through enough in my opinion.
However it's well overall just so sad, I can't imagine what Alex must feel like right now.
Date: 15/06/2009 19:54 Title: Chapter 3
I like this very much :)
this is a very interesting theme, but tricky to pull off well. This story, however, is the epitome of pulling this off well :) I hope to see more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm walking a fine line with this story, and I'm glad that people seem to like it so far. :) Thanks for reviewing! Emmy