Date: 16/04/2012 11:51 Title: Chapter 7
You are wonderful. I love your work, and if you never post again, I will die with grief.
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely series of reviews :-) I'm g;ad you're enjoying the stories. Hopefully there are still more for you to read here ... and then perhaps ... later this year, a final part of the Blood & Fire arc!
Date: 27/11/2009 20:40 Title: Chapter 7
omfg, this is the longest and most exciting cliffhanger prologue I've ever had the pleasure to read! I *love* the plot, from poor Alex ending up back in the SAS snakepit again, to Scorpia turning up and wanting Alex to *work for them* and twisting his emotions around to the point where curiosity will *kill* him if he doesn't do what they want... Yassen, probably alive, Ian Rider, maybe alive and tangled up with Scorpia like all get out... hell, that's good! I love you! :)
Author's Response: (huggles!) ... Diligently working on Part 3, in which Alex seems to have gained a mind of his own and simply WILL NOT be told what to do!
Date: 27/07/2009 05:43 Title: Chapter 6
Wow. I loved that you made Alex a bit more... badass in this chapter. He still got beaten, but you pretty clearly showed that he's not just some random teenager that got dragged into this. (And, what was Snake doing while Alex and the Australian guy were fighting?). The characterization is still incredible, and I thought you showed Alex's confusion and hope particularly well. I'm looking forward to the last chapter of part one. Although I have the sinking feeling, just from the title, that he's going to wind up working for them again.
Author's Response: (And, what was Snake doing while Alex and the Australian guy were fighting?) euh ... being held back? :p!! Thanks for reading!
Date: 20/07/2009 16:49 Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter, and thanks for updating so quickly! I wasn't sure at the end- did he actually collapse from exhaustion, or was it a complication from his injury? Not that it would matter to Wolf either way.
Author's Response: Probably a combination of both ;). Poor mite has had a rough few months!
Date: 19/07/2009 18:22 Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, yay - the pictures are so much fun. Where'd you pull them from? Anyway, also love the technical details. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *cough*googleimages*cough* ... I used to go pony trekking in the Brecon Beacons, so I had an exact idea of what landscape I wanted to show. I think a lot of people don't realise how beautiful (and cold!!) some parts of Wales can be (although Torchwood had now made Wales "cool") -- glad you like!
Date: 19/07/2009 02:26 Title: Chapter 2
I really like how Alex hasn't really let anything slip to K-unit. And the descriptions are also very accurate when compared to other fan fictions that deal with Brecon Beacons. Will this be a long fic or...?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review - Part 1 is 6 chapters in total (about 16,000 words) ... Part 2 is currently being planned and will be or about equal length I hope. Thanks for your lovely review!