Reviews For Breathing
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Reviewer: Sillybookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/01/2011 20:10 Title: Breathing

Intense. Gah.

I just read a really fluffy oneshot... and then I read this.

Polar opposites much? xD

Your writing is amazing. And the last line just melted my mind. I must steal compliment that. =D

Reviewer: Elkje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 13:44 Title: Breathing

Wow. That was intense. Guess I will think a lot more about my own breathing from now on.

Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/2009 19:23 Title: Breathing

For such a small story, it was very intense! Thank you so much for sharing!  

Reviewer: Anne Phoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/2009 16:18 Title: Breathing

omg I think my breathing went into sync with Alex's ... I inhaled when he inhaled, exhaled when he exhaled and then held my breath at the descriptove anticipation of what was to come ... only to breathe out with relief at the end. Thanks for sharing!

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