Date: 03/10/2009 01:59 Title: Chapter 4: Legal Deceptions
Very interesting. Especially loved how Alex started thinking of when he would have his next mission, not even thinking of it as 'if'.
Shouldn't Jack be paid as a housekeeper? I've always just assumed that MI6 handles the money. Kind of like Jack is just their appointed guardian, but they can step in if needed. Oh, and would Alex have inheritance waiting in the bank from his parents? I would assume that spies(John and Ian) are paid well, especially with all those vacations Alex has been on.
Date: 14/08/2009 19:41 Title: Chapter 3: Essential Gossip
I agree with you on the authors note, the government doesn't tell us everything, and truthfully it would be stupid if they did! ^_^
Thank you, I liked the chapter!
Author's Response: Ye it would ^^ You're welcome, and thank you for taking the time to read all of it and review as well! ^^
Date: 14/08/2009 19:39 Title: Chapter 2: Daylight Livings
I liked the banter going on between Alex and Tom, it shows their friendship in a fun way.
The line breaks, while different as the only breaks using letters are usually 'HPHPHPHP' or such, seem to have a problem as there is a number before and after the quote, *shrug*
A fun read so far! Thank you!
Author's Response: I thought I fixed that. -_-; Guess I didn't. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it as soon as I figure out why that's happening! ^^
Date: 14/08/2009 19:35 Title: Chapter 1 A Thief in the Night
Loved the last line, very wity and suspenful! I'm slightly wary of Blunt now--he can watch Alex sleep? O_O Lol.
Very nice begining, thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Lol, I didn't realize how creepy that is until you pointed out. Thank you for taking the time to read this and review!