Date: 11/01/2010 13:41 Title: Chapter 4
Intrigue indeed - I like a bit of solid plot so this is very promising! Chap 3 seems to have some formatting issues, but all ok again with Chap 4 (?) ... Looking forward to more!
In response to your previous comment. I don't really read much on ff.net any more as I don't have time to wade through all the terrible fic there. At least here I know the Admins will correct a typo every now and then and I know some fic have been rejected for being too poor so don't waste my time :-).
Date: 01/01/2010 01:46 Title: Chapter 2
Nice one - Alex seems rather distraught, bless him -- and a bit of blackmail always works for me!
Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw again. Hey I love your stories. I don't know if you remember me but on fanfiction I reveiwed you except I was under the name Izzy- I.R.T. hehehe I actually found this site only after you told me about it when you were saying that you updated here first. Thanks again. Goin to update now. I do the opposite of you. I update on fanfiction before I update here. So that is around 5 chapters ahead. So if you want to read my story you can read it there first.