Date: 30/12/2009 04:49 Title: Chapter 1
Awesome first chapter - especially the bit at the beginning with things like, he sat on the stool, his feet dangling in midair, - emphasizing how young he is and all - Ash's discomfort. And then the assassin scene was awesome, and then the Blunt and Jones scene!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, good, you caught those little hints toward his youth :D. I'm really glad you liked it all--I'll update as quickly as possible :).