Penname: Scorpia710 [Contact]
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Member since: 04/03/2009
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Likes: Coffee, books, classical/celtic music, (it sounds like I'm desribing Barnes & Noble, lol) watercolors, cats, and a good laugh.

Dislikes: When I make my bed up and some one comes in and sits on it. When my computer faints. When someone (you know who you are ^_^) edits my word documents by changing the names of characters.

 



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Reviews by Scorpia710
Rated: General - all ages
Summary: FeatureAfter a series of attacks, Alex's entire class is sent to be trained at the SAS training camp, to give them a degree of selfsufficiency to help them defend themselves. Unfortunately for Alex, he has to go with them... and not get noticed as 'different'.
Categories: Action/Adventure
Characters: Wolf
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 12 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 76831 • Views: 10740
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2008 Updated: 04/01/2010
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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Brilliant writing.

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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*Clapps* I really do love it.

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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Heh, poor Wolf. Very funny chapter, :P

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: FeatureThe truth is not necessarily black and white. Alex needs to grow up and bit and start making his own decisions about what is right and what is wrong. Unfortunately for Alex, wherever he goes and whatever he does, he always attracts more than his fair share of trouble.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Mission
Characters: Alan Blunt, Yassen Gregorovich, Tulip Jones, Original Male Character, Alex Rider, John Rider
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 7902 • Views: 17123
[Report This] Published: 10/10/2008 Updated: 22/12/2008
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Date: 14/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: During Eagle Strike

Yassen's alive! That makes me very happy, ^_^

Short chapter but intense at the same time, I loved the desription of both Alex and Yassen in the begining.

Thank you for sharing!

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: FeatureAlex wants to be normal so badly, but something will happen to change that
Categories: Action/Adventure
Characters: Alex Rider
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 7289 • Views: 7649
[Report This] Published: 23/10/2008 Updated: 15/05/2009
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Date: 14/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Normal Day?

Interesting begining! I liked Alex's last line, he's cool, ^_^

The different line breaks were pretty...but really distracting! It might help to stick to one and go with that.

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: The line breaks were a fluke... I'm leaving them nice and simple! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed
Date: 14/08/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lol, it's nice to see Alex having fun with his friends. A few typos, might want to have another look over the chapter just to get rid of the annoying things, =)

 

Rated: General - all ages
Summary: FeatureAlex Rider has been framed. He is not an internationally famous, ruthless thief. Fortunately, Blunt believes him. Unfortunately, his idea of dealing with the situation involves bringing in a certain SAS unit to track Alex’s every move...er... protect him.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Characters: Alex Rider, K Unit
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 9756 • Views: 4199
[Report This] Published: 29/11/2008 Updated: 02/10/2009
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Date: 14/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A Thief in the Night

Loved the last line, very wity and suspenful! I'm slightly wary of Blunt now--he can watch Alex sleep? O_O Lol.

Very nice begining, thank you for sharing!



Author's Response: Lol, I didn't realize how creepy that is until you pointed out. Thank you for taking the time to read this and review!

Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed
Date: 14/08/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Daylight Livings

I liked the banter going on between Alex and Tom, it shows their friendship in a fun way.

The line breaks, while different as the only breaks using letters are usually 'HPHPHPHP' or such, seem to have a problem as there is a number before and after the quote, *shrug*

A fun read so far! Thank you!



Author's Response: I thought I fixed that. -_-; Guess I didn't. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it as soon as I figure out why that's happening! ^^

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Date: 14/08/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Essential Gossip

I agree with you on the authors note, the government doesn't tell us everything, and truthfully it would be stupid if they did! ^_^

Thank you, I liked the chapter!



Author's Response: Ye it would ^^ You're welcome, and thank you for taking the time to read all of it and review as well! ^^

Rated: General - all ages
Summary: Alex sinks into depression as he faces his first Christmas without his uncle, Ian Rider.
Categories: Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Alan Blunt, Yassen Gregorovich, Tom Harris, Tulip Jones, Alex Rider, Helen Rider, Ian Rider, John Rider, Julia Rothman, Jack Starbright
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 17833 • Views: 1051
[Report This] Published: 09/01/2009 Updated: 10/01/2009
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Date: 10/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: 2008 Advent Drabbles, Dec 01 thru Dec 25

Wow, that's a lot. I really liked them. It is sad how some looked like they could have been made into amazing stories. Any chance of you writing a longer version of some? :D Thank you for sharing, I loved the idea of Mrs Jones watching It's A Wonderful Live, lol.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your wonderful review. I have a few stories planned around some of these - the entire Mdina 'vacation' where Yassen meets Helen, Jack's 'kidnap' by Alan Blunt, etc. Right now I have a major fic going on my LJ called 'Avoidance' (about 30k words) and it will be posted here when it's complete.

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: FeatureAged 16, things have gone very badly for Alex Rider. And, the way he sees it, there's only one way to set things right. NOT a death-fic... but it was a close run thing.
Categories: Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: None
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 22437 • Views: 5880
[Report This] Published: 20/02/2009 Updated: 20/02/2009
Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed
Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it, like most of your work. Well written and very exciting.

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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Grammar is wonderful, ^_^ Thanks so much for sharing!

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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Angsty--but wonderfully so, lol.

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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the last line, pure Alex.

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Date: 10/12/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I thought the chapters were longer, but it's been awhile since I read it, and I still find it fantastic. Thanks for sharing!